Overall, I'd say this remains a solid narrative; I'd highly suggest getting an editor to review your grammar and sentence structure. While I'm intrigued by the world, the pace and awkward dialogue can be jarring at times--nothing a good editor coming behind you to do some proofreading can't fix!
The plot is good, but too fast paced for my taste. The characters being female-leaning instead of pure androgenous is another negative. Seems like a good game with heart to it though. Just definitely not my jam.
I don't know what happened but "Room 3,Just Like Before", after meeting with Leatrix the game brought me to the map to start the next part but it doesn't continue, there isn't another part showing up.
all of the map scenes are way off, in the elven story the screen is centered on the edge of the map, and in the beast scenes it's centered in the middle of the ocean
hey there i have been playing throug the mankind route and i kinda seem to have run out of quests after "Room 3, same as last time" my quest list is completely empty. is there something i need to do or is this just the end of the story for the mankind route. Also, i only had 1 single side quest which was the Leatrix one.
From a story perspective, it's weird that in the beast path, MC is a godlike warrior and leader, but in the elven path, he's just a piece of meat. Not a diplomat, or ruler, with the wisdom of an elven goddess inside him,not a force to be reckoned with.In words he seems to be like that, but in actions he is just a tool that can't stand his ground (part of Astya in particular). It's frustrating, but it's not the full story, so I'll take it. Still have a good chunk of good game to enjoy.Keep it up.
I agree with that, and it’s a really good approach to storytelling. And it works now, even when we don’t see the whole picture, don’t get me wrong.
My point is that every path Kai takes, even now, really feels different depending on what he wants. Whether he wants revenge or to protect his loved ones, you can see it in his actions. But if you take his desire to free the enslaved, you don’t see a desire for freedom, you see how Kai, in order to achieve his goal, does the same thing that his people do in order to survive – he “sells” himself. Through his actions, he makes the very thing he’s fighting against, becomes an example of the very thing he wants to get rid of.
It’s a cruel irony, and I take my hat off to that plot. But the problem is that Kai does all of this by doing nothing. In a situation where he’s the underdog, where brute force isn’t the answer, he doesn’t try to negotiate, outsmart, or find other ways. He just exists and he is not fighting back. And you, as a player, can't do anything. That's what leaves an aftertaste.
Anyway, I'll be watching and waiting with interest for the further development of the plot and the game. And I apologize if I may have seemed rude - I'm not as good at choosing words as I would like.
I'd echo your sentiment; it would've been nice to have a semblance of agency in how you approach each of these ideals, especially when determining whether an active or passive approach was better suited for your particular playthrough. This story has a lot of potential but the lack of proactive interaction we the player receive regarding world interactions, when it's presented as us "driving" Kai, can leave a sour taste.
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There are good VNs out there and I can definitely say this is one of them, what a Goty <3
I love you so much Chrystello.
Overall, I'd say this remains a solid narrative; I'd highly suggest getting an editor to review your grammar and sentence structure. While I'm intrigued by the world, the pace and awkward dialogue can be jarring at times--nothing a good editor coming behind you to do some proofreading can't fix!
The plot is good, but too fast paced for my taste. The characters being female-leaning instead of pure androgenous is another negative. Seems like a good game with heart to it though. Just definitely not my jam.
how do i get the human route?
你的选择顺序需要是2221，注意，次顺序不包含你是否接受同性内容和其他剧情无关的选择
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how to get elven route?
你的选择顺序需要是2221，注意，次顺序不包含你是否接受同性内容和其他剧情无关的选择
Why is the main character raping people in the elf story? WTF?
I don't know what happened but "Room 3,Just Like Before", after meeting with Leatrix the game brought me to the map to start the next part but it doesn't continue, there isn't another part showing up.
Okay,if anyone does have this issue, they have a fix in their discord
They need to post it elsewhere, because their discord channel doesn't fucking work.
TRUE dude
all of the map scenes are way off, in the elven story the screen is centered on the edge of the map, and in the beast scenes it's centered in the middle of the ocean
somehow the elven route is locked
If it is locked it is from your choices you made so make choices in favor of freedom
在选择的时候按照以下顺序选择，2221，注意，此顺序不包括选择是否启用同性内容的选择。
hey there i have been playing throug the mankind route and i kinda seem to have run out of quests after "Room 3, same as last time" my quest list is completely empty. is there something i need to do or is this just the end of the story for the mankind route. Also, i only had 1 single side quest which was the Leatrix one.
There are new scenes for each romance in the human route, there are also some for the beast and elf path.
There's currently a bug on that quest, a temporary fix has been released on Discord.
An update will come this weekend addressing all the caught issues.
Was that bugfix released yet? I had to start over because of this patch, and I don't want to run into a major bug.
From a story perspective, it's weird that in the beast path, MC is a godlike warrior and leader, but in the elven path, he's just a piece of meat. Not a diplomat, or ruler, with the wisdom of an elven goddess inside him,not a force to be reckoned with.In words he seems to be like that, but in actions he is just a tool that can't stand his ground (part of Astya in particular). It's frustrating, but it's not the full story, so I'll take it. Still have a good chunk of good game to enjoy.Keep it up.
Each route will be different, each route is a different personification of Kai's personality.
Having the same "route" style in the Elven/Beast/Human wouldn't be good writing (in my opinion).
It would make all routes the same, just different races, and that was not my aim.
I agree with that, and it’s a really good approach to storytelling. And it works now, even when we don’t see the whole picture, don’t get me wrong.
My point is that every path Kai takes, even now, really feels different depending on what he wants. Whether he wants revenge or to protect his loved ones, you can see it in his actions. But if you take his desire to free the enslaved, you don’t see a desire for freedom, you see how Kai, in order to achieve his goal, does the same thing that his people do in order to survive – he “sells” himself. Through his actions, he makes the very thing he’s fighting against, becomes an example of the very thing he wants to get rid of.
It’s a cruel irony, and I take my hat off to that plot. But the problem is that Kai does all of this by doing nothing. In a situation where he’s the underdog, where brute force isn’t the answer, he doesn’t try to negotiate, outsmart, or find other ways. He just exists and he is not fighting back. And you, as a player, can't do anything. That's what leaves an aftertaste.
Anyway, I'll be watching and waiting with interest for the further development of the plot and the game. And I apologize if I may have seemed rude - I'm not as good at choosing words as I would like.
I'd echo your sentiment; it would've been nice to have a semblance of agency in how you approach each of these ideals, especially when determining whether an active or passive approach was better suited for your particular playthrough. This story has a lot of potential but the lack of proactive interaction we the player receive regarding world interactions, when it's presented as us "driving" Kai, can leave a sour taste.
It's a little off putting with so little control of who you can be with.
Damn shame, some gay ass looking MC and futa shit damn shame.
Bruh stop being so cringe.